Thursday, 8 August 2019
My 2019 Speech Video-Palm oil
This is my speech. I did it on Tuesday in front of the class. I found it quite nerve racking to say it but I enjoyed watching my video with my family. I hope you quit using Palm Oil
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Hi selina, Amelia Here! I really liked your speech! I liked how your reached out to us with your topic. I think that you can improve on your speech by making it clearer. I really Like how you had memorised your speech very well. With a bit more work your speech could be amazingly epic. If you would like to check out my speech go onto the class site and look at it. Yours, Amelia.
ReplyDeleteHi Amelia
ReplyDeleteI agree with your feedback and I was very fast and didn't focus on practising my clarity. Thanks for commenting though.
Sincerely,
Selina